Front page: I like the masthead and the colour scheme you are using. I also think the image is very effective. It seems bare in places. ‘The 1975’ and ‘new tour releases’ don’t stand out enough. I’m not sure if I would leave Logan Harris at the very top of the page. Also make sure the genre is clear.
Contents: Looks good, Well done! I would make the writing clearer it is difficult to see on the grey background. Continuity of style is good however I would have some reference to magazine title. Need a lot more pages. You only have 31.
DPS: Also looks good Rhianna. I like the picture, colour scheme and link to magazine title. I would make the caption over the picture a little bigger. The column boxes need adjusting. Would there only be 3 questions in an article? The top right hand side of magazine is a little bare. Overall: Rhianna your magazine is well on its way to being very good. Keep up the good work.
Front page: I like the masthead and the colour scheme you are using. I also think the image is very effective.
ReplyDeleteIt seems bare in places. ‘The 1975’ and ‘new tour releases’ don’t stand out enough. I’m not sure if I would leave Logan Harris at the very top of the page. Also make sure the genre is clear.
Contents: Looks good, Well done!
I would make the writing clearer it is difficult to see on the grey background. Continuity of style is good however I would have some reference to magazine title.
Need a lot more pages. You only have 31.
DPS: Also looks good Rhianna. I like the picture, colour scheme and link to magazine title.
I would make the caption over the picture a little bigger. The column boxes need adjusting. Would there only be 3 questions in an article?
The top right hand side of magazine is a little bare.
Overall: Rhianna your magazine is well on its way to being very good. Keep up the good work.