3rd draft front cover

3rd draft contents page

3rd draft double page

Progress update

I have looked at the comments that have been made on my first draft and started making those changes in my second draft. However I need to get some more pictures so that I can see what the  double page would look like with a more musical photo and the front cover would look like with a more close up shot so I can shape the text around him.

2nd draft front cover

2nd draft contents page

2nd draft double page

Progress update

At the moment I am ahead of schedule so I have been asking for peer feedback and teacher feedback and been working on rearranging my cover, from the comments that have been made.

progress update

I have completed my first draft of my magazine and uploaded it. today I have been working on my content for my double page and getting other students comments on what is good and what can be improved or changed.

1st draft front cover

1st draft contents page

1st draft double page